I think the technology is more prosper than before, so many photos can be modified. Maybe these photos are different because of the makeup or the transformation.
Makeup can help women become more beautiful and more self-confident so many people always makeup before taking photos. If they think photos are not as beautiful as they think, they always modify them after taking pictures. So many people say that photos are always lying and not ture.
I always modify my photos too, because I want everybody to see that I am beautiful. In fact, I never believe that some super stars are pretty, many photos published are modified and faked. Most people know that, so they will think over and see personally and then they will judge whether this person looks good or bad.
Although many people don’t believe the photos, I will keep modifying my photos, because I want to memorize my photos and when I get older I hope that I can see my pretty photos when I was young.
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Hi Chloe,
ReplyDeleteWhat should I say? After reading your journal, I have to say you're luck because I understand Chinese. Look at the sentence you put here: "many people before taking photos always makeup." Is that English??????????????????????????(不是按鍵卡到) It's Chinese!
Anyway, still, 你表達的算切題，這是好事，如果你可以把部分的語法鋪陳的更English一些，相信分數會更高。一定要練習
以下我把一些錯誤列出來，please revise them. Thanks!
1. I think the technology is more prosper than before, so many photos are can modified.
什麼叫做are can?
2. Maybe these photos are different because of the makeup or the transformation
沒有句號 (沒錯，我很龜毛。)
3. Makeup can help women become more beautiful and more self-confident so many people before taking photos always makeup.
請把中文語法改成英文版，thanks.
4. If they think the photos is not as beautiful as they think, they always modify after taking photos.
第一、be動詞單複數用錯
第二、modify是及物動詞
第三、不要重覆photos
5. So many people say that photos are always lying and not ture.
這句OK
6. I always modify my photos too, because I want everybody sees me is beautiful.
請檢查want everybody sees me is beautiful這三個動詞的關係
7. But I never believe that some super stars are pretty, many photos published are modified and faked.
第一、就語氣上來銜接上文的話，這裡的but不適合，請找別的linking word
第二、many phots published are modified文法用得很好，good job
8. Most people know that, so they will think over and see personally than they will judge this person looks good or bad.
從so...到bad請大修，謝謝
9. Although many people don’t believe the photos but I will keep modifying my photos, because I want to take down my photos and when I get older I hope that I can see my pretty photos when I was young.
第一、這一串...ok，但如果你願意好心的多用一兩個合式的表點符號在裏頭的話...'趕雞不盡'
第二、take down my photos片語有誤