I am very hate the labor education but it is the important course so I can’t quit it. When I finish it, I always complain it all day long. There are many defects about it. Let me tell you about my opinions.
First, my labor education time is in the noon. I have to dust before have lunch, it is wasting my precious time. Second, the score will be reduced if you quit it once a day. Third, the master of labor education always makes me angry because they check my area very slow. Forth, he will ask you for proof if you want to ask for leave, it is very trouble and irritate. Fifth, I always want to go outside to eat lunch but the labor education so I can’t. Sixth, the master of labor education always complains your region is very dirty no matter how you work hard, I think it is not thoughtful.
My conclusion is that I hate the labor education. I always for the sake of it I can’t do my own things. If school wanted us to do lots of work, just one semester, please.
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Hi Chloe,
ReplyDeleteWow, it seems that you suffer a lot from doing the labor education. Poor girl.
寫得很順，但是文法請顧一下，OK?
1. I am very hate the labor education but it is the important course so I can’t quit it.
第一、小妹妹，I am very hate是very可怕的文法喔
第二、the important course改成an important course
2. When I finish it, I always complain it all day long.
請給complain一個介系詞
3. First, my labor education time is in the noon. I have to dust before have lunch, it is wasting my precious time.
寫before having lunch或before lunch
第二it really wastes my precious time不用進行式
4. Second, the score will be reduced if you quit it once a day.
once a day是一天一次ㄛ，你是要寫這個意思嗎?
5. Third, the master of labor education always makes me angry because they check my area very slow.
寫slow的副詞
6. Forth, he will ask you for proof if you want to ask for leave, it is very trouble and irritate.
中間用句號或分號，irritate改irritating
7. Fifth, I always want to go outside to eat lunch but the labor education so I can’t.
改...but I can't because of the labor education
8. Sixth, the master of labor education always complains your region is very dirty no matter how you work hard, I think it is not thoughtful. 哈哈哈
9. My conclusion is that I hate the labor education. I always for the sake of it I can’t do my own things.
你又在中是英文囉，I always for the sake of it I can't do my own things順序改一下
10.If school wanted us to do lots of work, just one semester, please.
意思怪怪的